Fun little dialogue exchange I enjoyed writing #conflictresolution #marines #amwriting #postapocalypse

ssgtSSgt Blake “Gibs” Gibson is probably one of my favorite characters I’ve ever written.  Well, “written” may be putting it strongly.  He’s basically just an amalgam of some good friends who picked up a rifle and served.

If you’re ever about to tell one of them, “thanks”, do make sure you’re not being a dick when you do it.

“Easy,” George said.  “Gibs is a Marine Veteran.  He tends to look out for people.  We know this about him.  We’ve all benefited from this attitude many times over, lest any of us forget.  It’s a little disingenuous to start complaining when the very attitude that makes him such an asset in our group gets directed at some strangers in need.”

“Yes, George, that’s all well and good but the fact remains,” Edgar interrupted.  He turned his attention back to me and said, “First off, thank you for your service-“

“Don’t…you…even…try to start in with that line,” I said.

“I beg your pardon?” he asked, genuinely confused.

“That ‘thank you for your service’ bullshit.  It’s what a Vet usually hears right before he’s told that he’s basically wrong and irrelevant.  If someone’s gonna tell me I’m full of shit, I want to hear it outright.  I don’t want to be buttered up with that line.  You know how many times I heard that line right before someone told me in the same breath that I was full of shit and didn’t know what the hell I was talking about?  I’ll give you a hint: it’s like a big, old, sloppy blowjob in your basic, garden variety porn.  It’s foreplay, Edgar, and you’ve just told me that you like it rough.”

Vacations and Book Research #amwriting #postapocalypse #books #fiction

I’ve been on vacation out on Catalina Island for the last week and a half, so I’ve been pretty quiet with the whole on-line thing.  I’ve read this is a big no-no in terms of social media connectivity – you basically have to keep quacking out into the great big empty if you want to keep people engaged.  There is such a thing as decompression, though, dammit.

It’s been good being disconnected.  It’s kind of like when I wrote my first book.  I wasn’t trying to sell anything or engage with anyone.  I was just trying to bang out a good story.  This little media disconnect has taken me back to that early kind of momentum.  This has been good for the second entry in the Commune series; the book currently stands at 91K words with a lot more stuff to cover before it’s done.  I’m still projecting a finish around August (I’d love to have it all done by the time the Audio book for Book One is released), but who the hell knows at this point?  The story has already taken enough unexpected turns that I’m giving up on predicting anything.  I can say with certainty that book two is available well before the end of this year.  As far as the audio for book two?  Eh.  R. C. Bray is a busy dude.  He’ll get to it when schedule permits, I’m sure.

In the meantime, I thought it would be fun to post links to some of the articles and information I dug up while doing research for these books.  There’s a broad array of stuff to cover and still quite a bit more to go.  Never thought I’d know as much as I do about burning poop…

In addition to the below links, I am indebted to a collection of friends who have served in the Military over the years and who have been gracious enough to consider and answer my questions regarding their lives and experiences.  These people include H. S. Brandt (USMC), James R. Clark (US Army), and Brett Nelson (USMC).  All of these folks will get a mention in the coming book; they have been instrumental in this whole process.

Marine/Military Life
http://foreignpolicy.com/2013/01/04/were-getting-out-of-the-marines-because-we-wanted-to-be-part-of-an-elite-force-2/
https://www.mca-marines.org/leatherneck/lingo/b
https://undertheradar.military.com/2015/05/37-been-there-done-that-nicknames-for-military-gear/
http://www.leatherneck.com/forums/archive/index.php/t-98713.html

Weaponry
https://www.botach.com/pws-mk1-mod2-long-stroke-piston-rifle-5-56mm-18-bbl/
https://tacmedaustralia.com.au/graphic-grisly-effects-high-velocity-gunshot-wound-leg/
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/5.56%C3%9745mm_NATO#Improvements
https://deserttech.com/product_overview.php?product_id=2&load=product_overview
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heckler_%26_Koch_HK416

Logistics
http://www.alu.army.mil/alog/issues/SepOct01/MS673.htm
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Classes_of_supply
http://www.thesurvivalistblog.net/dealing-with-human-waste-and-hygiene/
https://dmna.ny.gov/foodservice/docs/Field_Sanitation_Team_Certification_Course/Instructor_Manual/L006LP_Waste_Disposal_LP.pdf

Needed to develop some relationships. Wrote a scene involving a pissing contest…involving actual piss. #amwriting

pissingmatch

Image Credit: Universal Pictures

It’s okay to write about pee-pee if you’re also about the business of developing your characters and plot.  That’s my story, anyway…

Commune Book One is available right now on Amazon, Kobo, and Barnes & Noble (see the free preview).  Book Two (including the epic pissing match in question) will be available later this year.

Everything I (N)ever Wanted to Know about POOP #yuck #apocalypse #amwriting

DisgustThe last couple of days have seen me diligently researching any and all details I can find regarding field disposal of human waste, including historical measures, techniques, outhouse construction, the utility of pit and burn out latrines, and the safety and sanitation hazards one needs to consider when preparing to shit into a hole.  This is what comes of writing post apocalyptic fiction.

Today, I was eating my lunch while reviewing the following picture.  It was during this time that I thought to myself, “You know, this probably isn’t what my mother thinks about when she tells her friends that I’m a published writer…”

Defecating_into_a_pit_(schematic)

Defecating into a pit (schematic): Credit Wikipedia

Commune Book Two Progress and Book One Free Preview #writing #postapocalypse

This morning sees the manuscript at 73K words and my very rough guesstimate is that I’m about halfway through, give or take.  The outline, strictly followed, calls it 50% of the way there, but I’ve had additional ideas while in the process of writing that I’ve jotted down.  I may include them or not, depending on relevance to the story and how they effect the flow.  It’s looking good, though.  I’m happy with how things are progressing and the pacing feels right.

You can grab a copy of the first book in the series by clicking the cover below if you need to catch up.  Feel free to crack open the free preview and see if this is a story you’d like to dive into.  I’m well aware that some people are resistant to starting a series that isn’t yet finished but I can fairly promise you that this one is getting finished.  I’ve had the whole series (three books) mapped out from the start; there’s not really any point where I’m running into writer’s block here.  I know what the whole story is; I just need the time to write it out.  The whole series will be done by early to mid next year.  I’m pushing hard to have the second book complete towards the end of August.

Click here to preview Commune Book One and/or purchase your copy.

US Military Men & Women – Share Your Stories! #marines #army #navy #airforce #coastgaurd

military

I’m a civilian.  The only knowledge I have about military life is what I’ve learned from my dad, who was a Soldier, and my other friends who have served, in addition to what I’ve researched for myself.

This presents a hell of a challenge, then, when a major character in my second book (currently in progress right now) is a 12 year veteran of the Marine Corps.  The reader spends a lot of time with this guy, so I’ve had to create not just a character, but a character with a realistic military career in the United States Marine Corps.

That shit is hard.

Lucky for me, I have some good Marine friends, both veterans as well as active service members, who can protect me from doing idiotic things.  One of them is listed in the acknowledgements of Commune Book One (Hi, Scott); another of them (currently stationed out in Okinawa right now) is looking like he’ll be a big part of me keeping Book Two on point.

I’ve spoken to a few vets on the matter and, so far, they all seem to appreciate the fact that the main thing I’m trying to do is show the most realistic portrayal I can of the military mindset and lifestyle, warts and all.  I’m getting the impression that these guys are excited about having their stories told, even if it’s only in a work of apocalypse fiction.

I’m trying to do a lot of things in this series of books, one of which is to honor the service and actions of the men and women of the United States Military in the truest way that I can, showing them as the real, complex people that they are.  Call it a fanboy love letter, if you like.

Whether I’m qualified or not, I’m taking on the role of a collector and keeper of stories, here.  If you have served or are currently serving and you have stories you want to share from your experiences (pretty or ugly), whether you were in country, on base, or in basic, please feel encouraged to send them my way.  If they work out for the story I’m trying to tell, an adapted version may end up in my books (with your permission).  Even if they don’t, I’ll be posting them up here at this site (again with your permission, of course – you or I can change names to protect the not-so-innocent).

I don’t know how much range this post is going to have or if there will be a lot of takers but I’d sure as hell like to get as many eyes on as I can.  If you’re reading this right now and you know anyone who might be interested, please share this along and direct them to my contact info on this site so they can drop me a line.  No story is too small; I’m not necessarily looking for a bunch of top tier operator stories, though if you went out and did that, it’s cool and you’re welcome here too.  But the background folks, whether you ran logistics in an office of slung food in the mess, I want you here too.  The lowliest grunt who never did anything more than fill a gas tank is still more of a badass than me; you guys are all my heroes, men and women alike.  You all have a place here.

I’m looking for human stories.  Whether it has to do with your first or last firefight; or that night you got bored, lit your pubes on fire, and ended up in the infirmary; or that wild time in Thailand that you can only vaguely remember.  I’m interested in all of it.  I’m damned sure not the only one.

Josh

5 Star review for Commune Book One “Clear, concise, believable and sets the hook from the beginning.” #books #postapocalypse

A lovely 5-star was left for me this morning on Amazon:

Love Joshua Gayou’s style. Clear, concise, believeable and sets the hook from the beginning. Love Billy and Jakes relationship and cant wait to see how Amanda’s path crosses theirs. Sure hope Mr Gayou has sequel ready for publishing. Really looking forward to the whole series.

I can’t describe how gratifying it is to hear feedback like this.  Above all, I set out to entertain when I started writing this series.  Hearing from folks that this has been accomplished makes my whole day; there is simply no other way to describe it.

As I’ve said before, I’m aware of how much content across diverse media platforms is out there competing for your attention.  Everyone’s time is limited and I take yours very seriously.  Chief among my concerns is writing something into which you’ll feel good investing money, time, and energy.

Should you be interested in picking up a copy of the book, you can find it on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and Kobo in ebook and paperback formats (click here for various purchase links).  You can also preview the book and decide if it’s the kind of thing you want to dive into from any of these sites or just click the picture of the book on the right bar of this site.

Should you be interested in discussion or asking questions about this book or any other things in general, you’ll find numerous methods of contacting me here on this site as well.  I’d love to hear from you.

Josh

Commune Book One Now Available at Barnes and Noble #postapocalypse #ebook #adventure #fiction

Commune Book One Preview

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For all of you lovelies out there who don’t dig on Amazon or Kobo but partake of the B&N Nook…ocity?  Nookitude?  Nookchuckus?

I don’t know where I just went, there.  Anyway, if you have a Nook, you too can come escape into my little slice of unheaven.  Enjoy and thank you all.

Josh

Commune Book One: A Thinking Reader’s Post Apocalypse #books #reading #postapocalypse

Progress on Commune Book Two is banging along at a fantastic pace!  I’m already one third of the way finished (or maybe a little less depending on what the total length ends up being; it feels like it may be a bit longer than the first book right now).  It would be really friggin’ cool if I had it ready to publish around the time the production of Book One’s audio book is finished.

Commune Book One Preview

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In the meantime, the first book calls out to all you fans of the post apocalypse genre.  For any who enjoy dreaming about how you would fair in a total societal breakdown or who wonder about your chances of surviving a world suddenly made lawless and hostile; for any preppers who fancy themselves ready for the day the lights go out; for any military (either active service or veterans) who would view the situation as just another day at the office: this series of books is my little love letter to all of you (kiss!).  Click the image of the book cover for a free preview!  You can grab a copy in both ebook and paperback formats.

See what other readers are saying about Commune Book One!

Why Write an Apocalypse Story? #writing #apocalypse #fiction

Learn more about the subject of this article by getting a copy of Commune Book One at this link or check out the free preview on my site.

End of the WorldApocalypse, Dying Earth, Survival, Shit-Hits-The-Fan, or whatever else you want to call it; I’ve been a fan of this genre for a long time, now, and it would seem I’m not alone.  Strangely, it seems to still be lacking an official sub-genre category listing on the big sites like Amazon, Kobo, and so on but, you know…changing databases is HARD.

I did not realize that my first book was going to be placed in this setting (I actually didn’t have any idea that I was going to write my first book until I started banging away at the keyboard), nor did it occur to me that my first effort would end up being a series a books (go big or go home, right?).  I had just finished listening to a string of them and the genre seemed well occupied.  Did I really have anything worthwhile to add?

Over time while reading or listening to these works from other authors or watching the visual analog on TV (Walking Dead, anyone?), it became apparent to me that the answer was “yes”.  In each of these offerings, I noticed that there were always points where the story began to scratch the surface of topics or plots that really began to interest me without really exploring in the way that I would have liked.  There was always this teasing going on where they would walk right up to the edge of an idea and then back away.  In some cases, this was totally understandable because the things that interested me didn’t necessarily dovetail with the story that the author (or scriptwriter) wanted to tell.  In the worst cases, it was deeply frustrating; I felt that there were a lot of missed opportunities along the way when the characters weren’t just making outright stupid decisions (Walking Dead, anyone???).

I resisted the urge to set the Commune story in an apocalypse landscape but, after a lot of deliberation, I just found that the environment was really the most conducive to what I wanted to do.  There were a lot of ideas and concepts that I wanted to explore, covering topics in the areas of primitive survival, small group dynamics, human adaptability, the price of humanity, and the impact of and coping with loss.  It’s true that many of these are explored in other stories but I just felt that I had more to say on the matter.  An apocalypse in which the human population has taken a significant hit (such that there are no more governments anywhere) gave me the sandbox I wanted.

Additionally, there is a bit of wish fulfillment that I believe we all experience when reading these stories.  There is a base understanding that, in such a situation, everyone is reset back to zero.  Put another way: your past history, mistakes, regrets, and transgressions are wiped away.  You have the ultimate chance to start over.  In debt up to your eyeballs?  Not anymore!  Trapped in a dead-end job or can’t get hired at all?  Doesn’t matter now!  Are you locked in a loveless marriage?  Here’s your chance for a little fresh romance!  Have you ever wanted to live in a mansion?  Go find one and move in!

All of this can be yours; you need only survive the end of the world.

I love this idea of a mass, societal reset.  I’m drawn to the idea that the criminal could find redemption or that the common accountant might grow into a skilled survivor.  I’m compelled by this idea that people could get the chance at a do-over if only some agent would step in and erase society along with all of the rules, limitations, and boundaries that seem to hold so many people pinned firmly in place.

The genre gives me an incredible, nearly limitless workshop in which to go about the business of developing characters, which is really what this is all about.  They can be built up and empowered or dragged through the mud and tortured pitilessly.

My own personal workshop; and I have a freshly sharpened set of chisels.